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Yoko Littner by AleximusPrime Yoko Littner by AleximusPrime
Wow, I can't believe I pulled this off! :wow: Probably my best pic on here yet, wouldn't you guys say?!

Well, this is Yoko, in all her glory! Her 'timeskip' appearance which is why it's different from the usual outfit she wears. I think I like this appearance best, but I do miss the little cracked skull up in her hair. But she's Yoko so she never doesn't look hot! :iconfallinloveplz:

So yeah, I did this in Paint, I'm sure you noticed. I didn't come up with this pose, I used this pic [link] as reference and was inspired by this vid [link] to go ahead and draw it, although I'll probably never be nearly as good as that artist! They drew that whole thing spot on right in paint! I had to make a pencil drawing first for a template!

And as you can see this time I did all sorts of crazy detail like you wouldn't believe! Shading, highlights, wrinkles in the vest, eye details, something I usually have a hard time with! Probably the hardest part was the vest! I hate drawing clothes! :shakefist: Maybe that's why it's so easy (and fun) to draw Yoko cuz she doesn't wear a whole lot of them to begin with! :3 The hair however was rather fun! I love her hair! :love: And yes, I know 'they' are a little too big, but that's cuz of the foreshortening since she's bending over. The proportion is a tad bit off though. This is the best anime face I've ever drawn in my whole life although I do still need practice with the shape. And I spent hours touching up on random stuff to make this as good as can possibly be for my level!

All in all I'd say this is probably the best digital pic I've ever made before! I sure made her look gorgeous! :iconinloveplz: But what do you guys think? If you're a premium member, please give a critique cuz I would really like one! As for the rest of you, enjoy and gaze upon her beauty!

Be sure to check out my other Yoko pics here:

-EDIT- I made her right arm bigger, her legs less chubby, and touched up a few inaccurate things around. For comparison, I'll upload the original to my scraps.
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:iconmiapet:
When I first saw this, I was like. Woah. then I clicked on it, and I was like. WOOOAAAAH. There are some good things, and some slightly bad things in this picture. C:

First of all, I like the shading technique. And the lines are pretty good. (You should try thinning out the lines that over lap some time, like the ones at her neck and clavicle bone. Like, pointing the line ends. I'd like to see how that would look. :la: ) The use of shine looks pretty good, very organic and curved.

Now to the anatomy. You have some pretty good foreshortening, but there are some things that look off.
Her right arm(My left) seems a bit skinny. Maybe if you made it gradually get larger from the shoulder(larger) to the elbow(smaller).
Her upper thighs seem a bit larger than they need to be.(Comparing to the original pose picture and real life people) The jacket's wrinkles seem off, but that can be solved with practicing clothes. I suck at it too. D:
I will say nothing about her chest. It was done ok.(Though definitely the style of the anime and yoko-esque)
Hair seems pretty good. So does the hand.(er, hands)

I guess what I should finish up with is, try and do yer own art more. ;) This stuff is good, yes. But it's not yer own stuff all the way.
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well AleximusPrime, we NEVER expected something like this to come out of your creative mind (gotta watch out for the quiet ones). this was a very pleasant surprise and it is very well done. she's proportioned, she's colored well, and the shading is fantastic! doing pieces with people is always very difficult because proportions and (at least with me) skin color is never easy to get down pat. but it seems as if you did that effortlessly. the wrinkles in her clothing is impressive as well, yet another hard feat accomplished by you in this fantastic piece. i really like how she fits in the piece as well, it's in your face, but yet some parts of her hair flow off the page. it's great because you're not trying to smoosh her in one piece. can't wait to see more from you (hopefully more like this because it's AWESOME) and i'm looking forward to being wowed by your talent soon.
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:icongigasghast9001:
gigasghast9001 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
right boob needs to be bigger
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:iconaleximusprime:
AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This pic is over 3 years old, I'm not taking any suggestions anymore.
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:icongigasghast9001:
gigasghast9001 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that was constructive crittisism not a request
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:iconaleximusprime:
AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I never said anything about requests, I meant I am not taking any suggestions on how to improve this cuz it's such an old pic and I've gotten better now and therefore I'm not looking to update any pics this old.
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:icongigasghast9001:
gigasghast9001 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
can u send me a link to the improved version>?
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:iconaleximusprime:
AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This IS the improved version.
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:icongigasghast9001:
gigasghast9001 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN








#ritona
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:iconguardian-of-light137:
Guardian-of-Light137 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
Wait one where she isn't whereing that skull? YES! Insta fav.
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:iconaleximusprime:
AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's cuz this is the older Yoko, she didn't wear the skull then.
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:iconguardian-of-light137:
Guardian-of-Light137 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
Could of sworn she always wore it. Anyway the only reason I even said that is because I hate skulls they freak me out even if it is just a badge. Or pin whatever you wanna call it.
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